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Submerge yourself in love
While long awaiting stillness soothes
There is no eluding loves touch
Felt within the gentle trust
Love arrives once more
And fills your heart so full
As you once again
Submerge yourself in love.
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Posted in One Shot Wednesday
love the wrap around to this...as we continue to submerge ourselves...
ReplyDeleteThe beauty this poem portrays of a waiting and confidence in love - a confidence each person needs.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with One Shot
I appreciate and welcome your generous critique of my poem. Thank you both. ~.^ Helena
ReplyDeleteI submerged myself in love and fell in love with this poem. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully put Helena !
ReplyDeleteWhat would take hundreds of words in prose to convey,you do it in so few words and yet so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteDear Helena..
ReplyDeleteI liked it very much.. and yes, love has a depth that can submerge anything and highs or lows... Thanks for sharing...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html
Thanks everyone, for your kind words. ~.^ Helena
ReplyDeleteSmart, hopeful piece.
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