Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Tanka



Rays of comfort streak
Glimmering warmth enhancing
Over countryside
Fields of harvest beaming hot
Graced with solar reverence


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An attempt at Tanka and one of the hardest forms I've ever tried. 

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Thank you Lady Nyo for sharing your insights.

1 comment:

  1. Beautiful you have the 5-7-5-7-7 form down pat,I would say you now own tanka

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