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Monday, March 7, 2011
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There is certainly a magic in this triolet you've penned. Lovely musings! Notes on form: your iambs are crisp and precise, the rythm doesn't get lost and reminds me of a midsummer nights dream. Very well structured refrains Helena. Extremely good job all round!
ReplyDeleteSO NICE Helena,
ReplyDeleteyour words and rythm are spot on !
Love the Blog girl, everything here is as beautiful as you, dear friend !
JLynne
Poetry is like music, in fact music starts w/lyrics && then we just add the rhythm. It all tells a story && you can relate to every poem && song in some form or another. I will visit you often. I love your page && you are an awesome writer ! Luv the beauty of it all! Thank you truly for sharing x Joy
ReplyDeleteNice post. I'm glad I stopped by because you led me to another new site for me that stretched my writing ability.
ReplyDeleteLovely magical piece you can sense the magic in your writing...thank you....bkm
ReplyDeleteLove this! Excellent, perfect, esp. with that refrain finish line. Wish I'd written this (said in a non-jealous, friendly way.)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Helena!
ReplyDeleteHope you are feeling better.
I pinched your cat app to add to my blog, Hope you don't mind.
oh there is still magic here...smiles.
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