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Like grains of sand
Love will flourish
When allowed to commingle
To create a perfect union
To consider love as effusive as all that sand is a really nice thought. Also like that you use the word "allowed" b/c often there's an inhibition considering the limits of acceptability. Nicely done challenge response.
what a great idea, I can't wait to see were both you and JL go with this idea. I know it will be very unique.
nice i like the use of allowed as well..b/c without it does not work...nice write...
I appreciate your kind comments, thank you. H ~.^
This is very interesting! I have never seen this form of poetry before! It is very beautifully done! I am always looking for new ideas and trying to get out of my comfort zone! I have a poetry blog as well feel free to visit and share your opinions!
@ reflectionsofme, Thankyou so much. I appreciate your comments and as far the the form goes, I just write what I feel, without thinking too much about form...I write outside of the box lol!
Hi Helena, Love the poem, it is really beautiful !So glad you found the One Stop Poetry website, It has a lot to offer !HUGS !!JL&B
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