Heaven Scent
In the twilight of the moonlight
In the sea of tranquility
Nestled there amongst the clouds
Celestial sea of ethereal clouds
Light of sky the bay of rainbows
Sky of delicate blue divine
Sky so full of gossamer wings
Veiled beneath an ocean of stars
Soared the Angels heaven scent
Soared their flight in Sea of nectar
- Helena White
In the sea of tranquility
Nestled there amongst the clouds
Celestial sea of ethereal clouds
Light of sky the bay of rainbows
Sky of delicate blue divine
Sky so full of gossamer wings
Veiled beneath an ocean of stars
Soared the Angels heaven scent
Soared their flight in Sea of nectar
- Helena White
A great article on prosody from Gay here:
http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/04/one-stop-poetry-form-prosody-week-two.html
http://onestoppoetry.com/2011/04/one-stop-poetry-form-prosody-week-two.html
Nice one Helena. This is one I could recite as it flows beautifully.
ReplyDeletenice..i like the sea of nectar...you spin some beautiful imagery...
ReplyDeleteGreat job I love the feeling that comes as I read it. The imagery was wonderful. I love the pictures as usual:)
ReplyDeletea sky full of gossamer wings...makes me feel flying..
ReplyDeleteThe beauty flows in every word... Heavenly !
ReplyDeleteJL&B
Ahhh, the gossamer winded, primal nectar star soup. Boggles the mind, but your words give it flight.
ReplyDeleteAnd please be gentle with me too -- I have NO idea most of the time what I'm doing with poems either. I guess we're all in the same boat a lot of the time. :)
xo