Heavenly
mist mantled the sky
Jubilant
crowds rejoice
with tranquil delight, while the
Angels' paean begins
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~Paean Pe'on, A song of joyful praise or exultation~
Join us today at One Stop Poetry for an exercise in poetry form – the Shadorma
(The shadorma is a syllabic poem with the following structure: 3/5/3/3/7/5)
and what a beautiful paean it is...had to look that up...cool
ReplyDeleteyou have captured the magic of which you speak
ReplyDeletePeace, hp
You certaintly are a magical poet. I love it! Susie
ReplyDeleteYour words enhance your photo and the whole feels epic. It feels a preview to the longer piece. Well done and in the form! Gay
ReplyDeleteBeauty, magical moment... great form. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and picture. You have done a great job of combining the two.
ReplyDeleteYour writes are always full of magic Helena... Very enjoyable !
ReplyDeleteJL&B
Lovely words and image. (and unlike me you even counted correctly!)
ReplyDeletea heavenly write...tranquil delight to read...lovely...bkm
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for your generous comments...
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I think shadormas were made for mystical romancers...
ReplyDeletebeautiful work your Shadorma is lovely and a bit haunting!
ReplyDeleteI am intrigued by the beauty of the pictures you find as much as the mysterious beauty of your Shadorma.
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