Monday, April 11, 2011

The Celebration ~ Poetry form shadorma




Heavenly
mist mantled the sky
Jubilant
crowds rejoice
with tranquil delight, while the
Angels' paean begins

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~Paean Pe'on, A song of joyful praise or exultation~
Join us today at One Stop Poetry for an exercise in poetry form – the Shadorma
 
hosted by Leslie Moon  & Anne Welch 
(The shadorma is a syllabic poem with the following structure: 3/5/3/3/7/5)

13 comments:

  1. and what a beautiful paean it is...had to look that up...cool

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  2. you have captured the magic of which you speak

    Peace, hp

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  3. You certaintly are a magical poet. I love it! Susie

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  4. Your words enhance your photo and the whole feels epic. It feels a preview to the longer piece. Well done and in the form! Gay

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  5. Beauty, magical moment... great form. Nicely done.

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  6. Great poem and picture. You have done a great job of combining the two.

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  7. Your writes are always full of magic Helena... Very enjoyable !
    JL&B

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  8. Lovely words and image. (and unlike me you even counted correctly!)

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  9. a heavenly write...tranquil delight to read...lovely...bkm

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  10. Thanks to everyone for your generous comments...

    ღ ஆεlεɳa

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  11. I think shadormas were made for mystical romancers...

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  12. beautiful work your Shadorma is lovely and a bit haunting!

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  13. I am intrigued by the beauty of the pictures you find as much as the mysterious beauty of your Shadorma.

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